Talk:Chollas Creek
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Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 19:50, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
- ... that a California sea lion, later named Freeway, travelled up Chollas Creek (pictured) before traveling onto California State Highway 94? Source: https://www.nbcnews.com/news/animal-news/wayward-sea-lion-named-freeway-found-exploring-urban-san-diego-rcna29141
- ALT1: ... that a Kumeyaay village named Matt Xtaat was on Chollas Creek (pictured)? Source: https://www.indianvoices.net/images/2021/iv_sept_2021.pdf
- ALT2: ... that the Kumeyaay village on Chollas Creek (pictured) did not participate in the November 1775 attack on Mission San Diego? Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=KKg4AQAAMAAJ&pg=PA43
- ALT3: ... that Chollas Creek (pictured) empties into San Diego Bay within Naval Station San Diego? Source: https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Jeffrey-Homburg/publication/308716882_Geoarchaeological_Assessment_In_Results_of_Data_Recovery_at_CA-SDI-17203/links/57eca56f08ae92a5dbd07874/Geoarchaeological-Assessment-In-Results-of-Data-Recovery-at-CA-SDI-17203.pdf
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/No Highs
- Comment: A joint project between San Diego Central Library, and meta:San Diego Wikimedians User Group. Expanded article more than 5 times from 926 characters to 10762 characters. Article should be within policy; spell check was ran, nearly every sentence is referenced to a reliable source.
5x expanded by RightCowLeftCoast (talk), SDPLPauline (talk), TitaniumCup (talk), RFZYNSPY (talk), Vid2vid (talk), Halfadaychamorro (talk), and Pghedit (talk). Nominated by RightCowLeftCoast (talk) at 17:11, 29 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Chollas Creek; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Overall: Looks solid! No issues. I've added a Wikimedia Commons category. With ALT1 I wasn't sure if Indian Voices is considered a reliable source so I found an extra source confirming that point. The website covering the list of fish seems to be down, so I'm applying AGF on that (and it's not important anyway). Minor point: the sources, especially the 2015 one which seems the most professional, seem to agree that the California gnatcatcher isn't a major presence in the area so I would maybe reduce the prominence of it e.g. from the lead. Blythwood (talk) 04:59, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
Sources for Chollas Heights Navy Radio Station
[edit]- https://www.history.navy.mil/content/history/nhhc/our-collections/photography/technology/communications/radio/ug-21--us-naval-california-radio-station-collection/chollas-heights--san-diego--naval-radio-station.html
- http://lcweb2.loc.gov/master/pnp/habshaer/ca/ca1900/ca1935/data/ca1935data.pdf
- https://www.sandiego.gov/sites/default/files/mt_hope_burial_registry_1949-1970_part1.pdf
- http://www.sowp.org/wp-content/uploads/2018/06/LR-0006191801-SoWP-Yearbook-1971.pdf
- https://apps.dtic.mil/sti/pdfs/ADA390314.pdf
RightCowLeftCoast (Moo) 15:43, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
Potential new source
[edit]RightCowLeftCoast (Moo) 00:36, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Chollas Creek/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Dionysius Miller (talk · contribs) 20:33, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Initiative notification: Hello! I'm Dionysius Miller I'll be initiating your (long awaited) good article nominee review! Over the course of today (2/1/2024) and tomorrow (2/2/2024) I'll be putting together your initial assessment. Most likely there'll be a short or medium list of things to fix up some for a pass. I look forward to working with you and hope for success. Dionysius Millertalk 20:34, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Review 1.1
[edit]Here's your first-pass review. There could be additional points raised but this is at the very least a place to start and hopefully finish. Once the issues are addressed to your liking, I'll get another review in which will take the title of 1.2, and don't worry if 1.2 doesn't give you the pass, I think you are absolutely near GA status for this article and I'll help out however I can. As long as you need to get the article to GA, you have and we can keep progressing. I'll be with you every step of the way. Do give me warning if you have to take a break or leave of absence and I'll do the same. Godspeed! Dionysius Millertalk 22:19, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Here, much of it does come down to personal preference, but I think (particularly the lead) has some ways to better itself:
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | In general, this generally follows the MoS, though there is definitely some minor pieces to improve prior to GA status:
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | This is some really exemplary source gathering and documentation. I previously did some work on a local creek and this kind of information took some thorough digging. Pretty much perfect here. | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | This, too, is a straightforward pass. Though do be certain to cleanup the lead just a tad. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Everything is properly sourced, spot checking showed proper citation origins. | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Everything here seems perfect, the map in this article also taught me some about California state law regarding government copyrights. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | No clear and/or distracting deviations from the main purpose of the article | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Certain aspects of the history are a tad bit overly detailed and could be split or moved to another article. I recognize that's a fairly broad criticism, but I wouldn't mind a little 'tidying up'. Not super necessary though so it'd be more like a cherry on top for further reviews. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | It's clear you care, and you say the good and the bad of everyone and everything involved. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | :) | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | No fair use arguments needed, everything has a proper tag, great job on the pictures you took! | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Everything is relevant and, while I think the article would benefit from additional images, it is clear that this article covers an undercovered (and thus underimaged) subject. | |
7. Overall assessment. | Once you fix up the reading, style per MoS, and minor issues mentioned above, it's great and certainly a Good Article! |
- @Dionysius Miller: I have merged the short paragraphs into other paragraphs that are appropriate and have similar content. I have removed the citations in the lead section per MOS:CITELEAD. I then ran the article content through Microsoft Word, to find any spelling or grammar errors. Please let me know what other modifications are necessary.--RightCowLeftCoast (Moo) 04:05, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
Review 1.2
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Many of the single sentence/staccato paragraphs were combined where appropriate, certain wording changes made, and some grammar checking made. Absolutely GA worthy | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | MOS:CITELEAD implemented, MOS:PARA implemented. Follows the MOS quite faithfully. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Again, exemplary source gathering. | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Inline citations present when and where claims are made in the body of the text. | |
2c. it contains no original research. | No OR apparent. | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Article free of copyvios. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | On topic and comprehensive. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | On topic and encyclopaedic. Though I do think some small work in history might help if you make the push for FA. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | WP:NPOV followed. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Stable and without ongoing coflict. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | All media free from copyvios and include adequate tagging. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | All media is on-topic and well placed. | |
7. Overall assessment. | Congratulations on your latest GA! I felt and feel a little odd making recommendations and decisions on your work given the gap in experience, but I suppose that's the nature of a wiki. I am happy to know that this article is where it should be in standing and I truly commend you for your continued commitment to the common good and knowledge of all humanity. |
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