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Highly offensive track list

I have the R Kelly Chocolate Factory album and i can honestly say that this is not the track list of this album. This is highly offensive and damages my faith and the credibility of Wikipedia. Please alter or remove

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Article requirements:

Y A relatively complete infobox
Y Cover art in the infobox
Y A lead section giving an overview of the album

At least one section of informative prose other than lead
A track listing (for "start" class), containing track lengths & composers (for "B" class)

Y A list of personnel (specific band members (for "start" class), guest musicians and technical (for "B" class)

Categorisation at least by artist and year

While it does include some prose other than the lead, the majority of that section is quotes, which makes it questionable as "a section of informative prose". Contributors may wish to look at WP:ALBUM for some additional ideas on prose to incorporate. There are a long list of contributors, including musicians and technical personnel, =amg&sql=10:j9fuxqyaldje~T2 here, who are not included in the personnel listing. Also, There are no track lengths. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 02:42, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The above concerns have been address. I concur with the reassessment of "B", although I have communicated to the editor who reassessed that it is inappropriate to assess articles to which one has contributed. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 01:40, 9 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

To meet the more rigorous criteria of the revised B class, this article needs to be brought more in line with Wikipedia's standards by improving logical "flow" of the article. It would help to incorporate the review quotes into textual presentation rather than having them stand alone as quotes. In addition, more information might be incorporated as suggested at WP:ALBUM.

As a question, is personnel complete? Based on =amg&sql=10:j9fuxqyaldje~T2 this, it seems not, though knowing Allmusic i wouldn't be surprised if they weren't combining reissues as well as the original release.

Please see Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Assessment for additional information on B class in album articles. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 22:09, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Last edited at 22:09, 19 July 2008 (UTC). Substituted at 11:35, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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