Talk:Ching Hammill/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"After playing college football for Connecticut he played four seasons" fix grammar or add comma
- Comma added.
if you look at ref 1, its probably worth saying should his legs were amputated
- Added.
"received more playing time u" he was already on the varsity eleven so not sure how he could have gotten more playing time if he was already starting? The source says he switched from end to backfield in 1918.
- Changed.
add he was an end in 1917
- Added.
do you know if his all new england was first or second team? Add to infobox
- Uncertain of whether he was first or second team, but added to infobox.

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:46, 29 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]