Talk:Chillin (Wale song)/GA2

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 18:24, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking this up Calvin999, but you had also reviewed the first nomination. Will it be fine for you to take up the second one? —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 09:35, 24 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I can't see why not. It was more than a year ago? — Calvin999 09:37, 24 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'm fine with it, was just making sure if there are any protocols. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 11:59, 24 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

is a 2009 song → is a song (you go on to say it was released in 2009)
was written by a number of songwriters, → was composed by a number of songwriters, (written... songwriters is a bit receptive)
speaks about → discusses
What do you mean by "reference to go-go"?
and samples → and contains two samples
Provide a link to sample
Some praised the collaboration and composition, while others criticized Wale and Gaga's contributions. → So the collab was praised and criticised for the same reason: that it's Wale and Gaga?
Wale and Gaga's contributions. → This is a bit ambiguous. I think that's what is troubling me about the sentence as a whole.
In the United Kingdom, "Chillin" reached number 12 on the UK Singles Chart, → I don't think you need to say both United Kingdom and UK Singles Chart.
On incorporating this → On incorporating the
worked on "Chillin" include → worked on "Chillin" included (Tense)
Can electro-funk be added to the info box?
Link sample in the composition section again
opening with the line This how you → Missing quotation mark before 'This'
Generally articles put Music video after Chart performance?
One of Gaga's characteristic Great Danes also appears in the video wearing Beats by Dr. Dre headphones. → I think this needs some context. It took me a second to realise you are referring to "Poker Face".
Linking of Pitchfork Media needs to be swapped from ref 24 to ref 10. And non-italics.
HipHopDX and Sputnikmusic aren't usually italicised?
Any info for a release table and the formats given the info in the info box?

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. Though I doubt you'll need that! — Calvin999 15:19, 24 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Calvin999 sorry I had missed watchlisting the page. I have made the necessary changes now. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 13:42, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Great. Pleased to pass this time around. — Calvin999 16:06, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]