Talk:Chile at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:15, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:15, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
- "while Vega finished 32nd in the slalom." Best to write out which type of slalom.
- "26 yhears old"
- "8 years old" Write out eight and hyphens needed.
- "he is classified" Therefore classified?
- "won by xx of" Unfinished boilerplate.
- "He is classified as LW4, and competes in a standing position. He was 17 years old at the time of the Sochi Paralympics." Merge sentences.
That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 20:39, 27 August 2018 (UTC)
- thanks for the review, everything taken care of! Courcelles (talk) 16:59, 29 August 2018 (UTC)