Talk:Children's Air Ambulance
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Proposed deletion of 12:46, 11 January 2011
[edit]- Have manually changed the article to contribution by Tabletop from '02:47, 26 December 2010'. Hope this is good enough to avoid deletion, it was only 'Bhboy' going mad that caused the deletion proposal. --aliw136 22:27, 15 January 2011 (UTC)
Ongoing writing style and accuracy of this page
[edit]- Have changed this page to accurately descibe this organisation, including updated accounts, organisation and criticism, including references. In the past on this article there has been bouncing between fact and fiction. In future if we could avoid writing for the charity, and start writing about the charity.
- The page needs to make clear that this charity has no helicopter. No more referencing 'the helicopter' so freely, because there isn't one.
- The financial accounts and criticisms are current, referenced and relevant, so their is no need to make major changes their.
- Mentions of the other charities within the TAAS group are irrelevant, seperate pages should be created if you like.
- Future changes/additions by 'TAAS', which I guess means The Air Ambulance Service, should be unbiased, and 'LucyDerby'.
Negative slant
[edit]Around half of this article is given over to meticulously documenting every criticism that has been made. Seems disproportionate, gives an 'air' of bias. PRL1973 (talk) 10:37, 22 July 2014 (UTC)
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