Talk:Cheryl Tunt/GA1

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 03:34, 3 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There are a few dab links. More to come. Ruby 2010/2013 03:35, 3 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done
Links for Malory Archer and Cecil Tunt?
I wikilinked Malory Archer, but I did not do the same for Cecil Tunt. She has only mentioned her brother only once or twice in the series.
What is the Judy Greer quote referring to? What has become her family? Her work place? (Note that I've never watched this series before)
Somewhat related to the above comment, I think the article would benefit from a quick overview of the series (i.e. what the premise and setting are)
Both quotes address her personality. For the overview, do you want me to put it in the lead?

The lead seems like a suitable place. Ruby 2010/2013 16:22, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to have the premise of the show blend in with the flow of the article. Hope it is good enough.

"... characteristics an adopts..." - and?
Done
I'm sceptical that Greer is "best known" for her work in Arrested Development (and the article cited lists many productions she's been in)
Done
Arc and personality: indicate who Adam Reed is and link him (then remove the link in the below development section)
Done

That's about it. I'll place the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 16:49, 4 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

What's the status on this review? Are you planning on making the final fixes, or should I fail it? Ruby 2010/2013 16:21, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed all of the issues. :) —DAP388 (talk) 22:29, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]