Talk:Chemistry/GA1

GA Review

Hi, unfortunately this article fails to meet the Good Article criteria. Issues include:

• Inline citations go after punctuation marks, per WP:FN.
• Remove obvious self-referencing phrasing, such as "system (see subdisciplines)." – when this article is printed out on paper, this information will not be useful.
• Far too much information goes unreferenced, especially the "Basic concepts", which takes up about half of the article.

Feel free to resubmit this article for a renomination after it has improved.

Gary King (talk) 22:26, 30 June 2008 (UTC)