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Good articleCheck (Meek Mill song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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February 27, 2023Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Comments:

  • Could we shorten "Encore, Los Angeles, CA" to "Encore (Los Angeles)"?
  • "Throughout the video" → "In the video"?
  • "American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside handled the song's production, while they also co-wrote it with Mill." since this is the start of the body, how about ""Check" was produced by American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside, who co-wrote it with Meek Mill"? with links of course
  • "Young Thug's 2014 track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)", which features Mill" → "Young Thug's Mill-featuring track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)" (2014)"
  • Were these "series of tweets" of note?
  • You can remove the 2015 from "On June 29, 2015,"
  • "Def Pen" does not strike me as reliable. It honestly looks WP:SELFPUBLISHED
  • Minor but wasn't Consequence still Consequence of Sound in 2015?
  • "Sweeney said the song consists of "three synth notes and a huge beat"" this reads more like an actual description and not a reaction to it. I'd ditch it here or move it up to comp.
  • "Kevin Goddard depicted that Mill" don't think "depicted" is the right word here
  • "and opined that it "should probably have opened the LP"" we can paraphrase this
  • Do we know who directed the video during the initial shoot? Was it Jordan or was he brought in to finish it? I'd clarify this
  • Is the Young M.A. freestyle notable?
  • I ran the bot to archive all the URLs but it looks like it missed ref 3