Talk:Chauncey Archiquette/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 14:48, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 04:09, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added some cats.
"In 1896, Archiquette made his first varsity sports team" Link varsity?
"He was a member of Pop Warner's 9–2 football team" change to "head coach Pop Warner's"
"He graduated from Carlisle in 1899 and departed the school on March 6, 1899" What's that mean?
How did he play football at Carlisle in 1899 if he graduated in 1899 and departed in March? Was football in the spring?
"James Naismith, the founder of the sport, once cited Archiquette as one of his favorite guards." I don't think the source actually says that.
"After leaving Haskell in 1905, he joined Green's Nebraska Indians, an all-star barnstorming team," Were they a football team or baseball? The prior sentences were about baseball.
"He also umpired some of Haskell's football games after he college playing career ended" Change he to his.