Talk:Charlie Don't Surf (Veronica Mars)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

Review should be up soon. Good888 (talk) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

• Laura San Giacomo and Enrico Colantoni were linked twice.

• done

• "since their show Just Shoot Me!." I am not too sure that . is needed.

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Synopsis

• Optional, but try to add citations if possible. I know from the Manual of Style that it is not required but it helps!

• Citations to what?

• Perhaps ref 11?

• I added one at the end of the section. Let me know if you want more. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

• Should rape be linked?

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• Since this is Parker’s first mention, it should state her full name.

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• "A woman asks Keith to investigate her husband, who may be having an affair." Should have meanwhile at the start of the sentence.

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• Can fraternity party be linked?

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• "and presents an evidence." An evidence?

• oops.

• "Keith and Harmony flirt." Erm expand on this?

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Arc significance

• I am not too sure this section is needed. It already states this in the Synopsis.

• Removed

Production

• Matt Czuchry was already linked earlier.

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Reception

• Compare the ratings to Wichita Linebacker.

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• "Television Without Pity gave "Charlie Don't Surf" a "B+"." Can you expand this a bit?

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• "Reviewer Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode" I think the readers would already know Sepinwall is a reviewer considing this is the reviews section. Perhaps you could say: Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode on his blog What's Alan Watching.

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References

• Used Checklinks and found no problems. Yup it does say one is broken, but that was archived.
• Ref 1 needs its publisher.

• As far as I can see, all the refs have publishers. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

Placing on hold for now. Good888 (talk) 11:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review! I believe I have responded to all your concerns. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)^{talk to me!}_{see my work} 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

• No problem. There WAS a reference that did not have its publisher, but I have added it now. Promoting to GA class. Good888 (talk) 19:54, 16 August 2015 (UTC)