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Reviewer: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 21:17, 7 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tbhotch: Any news regarding this? I just wanted to make sure you didn't forget about this. Take your time and disregard this lol Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:08, 16 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Technically, you agreed with it. © Tbhotch (en-2.5). 19:10, 17 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality (prose is clear and concise, without exceeding quotations, or spelling and grammar errors):
    B. MoS compliance (included, but not limited to: lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists):
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources (it also includes an appropriate reference section):
    B. Citation of available and reliable sources where necessary (including direct quotations):
    C. No original research:
    D. No copyright violations:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):
  6. Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?
    A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are relevant, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
Resolved comments from Tbhotch
;General
  • Same as with "Tornero", you're using American English
Could you give some further examples?
Infobox
  • Alexandra Ivan, Băruță -> Alexandra Ivan, Gabriel Băruță
 Done
Lead
  • "Alexandra Ivan and Băruţă" -> "Alexandra Ivan and Gabriel Băruţă" (?)
 Done
  • "but criticizing the song as unspectacular and cheesy" -> but critici[s]ing the song as "unspectacular" and "cheesy"
 Done
Background
  • "Allegedly" -> "According to Bryan, he..." Allegations have legal connotations
 Done
Reception
  • "it received mixed response from music critics." -> Same as "Tornero"
 Done
  • "similarly calling it cheesy" -> I can't access the source, but if she called it "cheesy" it should be in quotations
 Done
  • "Commercially, "Change" failed to impact any country's official chart," -> I mean, yes, but the source never says this
 Done
In Düsseldorf
  • From your text: "two female backing dancers in black suits and hats performing a dance routine involving trumpets"; from the source "Two female backing dancers in black suits and hats were performing a dance routine involving trumpets"
 Done
  • From your text; " The background LED screen showed pulsating circles and ovals" ; from the source: "The background LEDs showed pulsating circles and ovals"
 Done
Points awarded
  • "12 from Italy and Moldova, ten from Belgium" -> Same as "Tornero"
 Done
References
  • Source 1, European Broadcasting Union. It never mentions "Change"'s length
 Done
  • Source 6, Prinz.de. Dead link, replace with archived link
 Done
  • Source 17, Star Gossip Magazine -> "In Romanian"
 Done
  • Sources 25 and 26, Eurovision World -> I didn't see this with "Tornero", where it should be replaced as well, but: "Eurovisionworld is a fan community for everyone who has a passion for Eurovision Song Contest. We are not affiliated with EBU or the organisation behind Eurovision Song Contest".
 Done

Article on hold. © Tbhotch (en-2.5). 19:10, 17 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tbhotch: Thank you for the review... I responded to your comments. Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:58, 18 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I have no other concern, so I pass its nomination. Well done. © Tbhotch (en-2.5). 21:44, 18 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]