Talk:Green Lantern (Six Flags Great Adventure)

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Speculation of Chang's relocation

The only verifiable fact of the second paragraph is that the ride will not see any riders until 2011 which was verified by the CEO in a recent interview. The rest is purely speculation written as fact by the author with nothing to back up his/her statements and will be deleted if sources are not posted. 69.23.208.51 (talk) 18:55, 30 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 21 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Infobox has inconsistent commas for 1000s (or 1,000s).
One very short para for the lead could be improved, it's supposed to summarise the article - my rule of thumb: check it against the table of contents, have you summarised the article in the lead?
"Bolliger & Mabillard stand-up roller coaster" three links without unlinked words between is confusing to a reader. It's a hard call but can you rephrase it?
Is there a suitable link for "inversions" for non-expert readers?
"About 1999, its track " -> "Around 1999, its..."
" early 2006" hyphen.
"track returned to its " perhaps "track was returned" as it didn't do it itself.
"(as confirmed by local media)" is that needed?
Don't overlink Six Flags.
What is "zoning approval"?
"The ride is located ..." reiterate the name.
What is B&M?
Link Riddler's Revenge first time round.
" peaked at #47" avoid hash for number per WP:HASH. Check others.
Don't SHOUT in the refs.
Check refs for correct use of en-dash in the title fields.

The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GAN criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Several comments above to be addressed.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Not far from decent, so I'll put it on hold for seven days. Let me know when you're ready for a re-assessment. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:05, 22 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: I believe I have addressed all the issues. Themeparkgc Talk 00:01, 23 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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