Talk:Chandra Khonnokyoong/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:26, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:26, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

General

Not an issue for GA, but is there any reason why you chose "mae ji" as the transliteration here, unlike the other two articles I've reviewed?

No reason. Someone else started the article, that's why. Fixed per Talk:Maechi#Requested_move_24_April_2015.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

She had no formal education, as this was uncommon for Thai women in those days: suggest "Like most Thai women in those days she had no formal education".

Done.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Setting up a new meditation centre

There are a couple of uncited sentences in the "Setting up a new meditation centre".

Fixed.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Luang Por Dhammajayo and Mae Ji Chandra took responsibility for the finances of the establishment, and the lay-supporter, who later ordained as Luang Por Dattajivo, took responsibility for building on the site: saying "the" lay-supporter implies he's already been mentioned; should this be "a" lay-supporter, or does it refer to someone named above?

No, it doesn't. Fixed.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That's everything; the article is in good shape. Mike Christie (talk – contribs – library) 12:04, 5 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:11, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. That was a bit quicker than the previous two! Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:33, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 08:30, 6 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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