Talk:Chandler Stephenson/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking a look at this! — Ghost River 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

Mention in first sentence that he previously played for the Caps Done
Per MOS:SEAOFBLUE, any "city, state" or "city, province" should be one link (to the city) and not two split; this applies to Saskatoon in both the infobox and lede Done
and in the midget hockey looks like a couple words are missing Done
Don't need to include WHL in parentheses if it's only used once Done
Overall could be expanded: my unofficial system is one paragraph for childhood & juniors (or college), one for professional Done

Early life

Comma after "hockey playing family" Done
Spell out "National Hockey League" with the acronym in parentheses after the first instance Done
Name for the brother? Done
Link concussion Done

Playing career

Amateur

"and in the midget hockey" looks like you forgot a few words there, huh? Done
he was signed with either "was signed by" or "signed with" works Done
Turns out we actually have a link for WHL Bantam Draft Done
The WHL acronym should be introduced at some point Done
During the offseason prior to his rookie season A little dense Done
What was his main focus with the personal trainer, etc., if it was mentioned?
Comma after "at the World U-17 Hockey Challenge" Done
Link the first instances of "goals" and "assists" Done
"Due to this, he was scratched for the Pats' first five games following the tournament." → "The injury also caused him to miss his first five WHL games after the tournament ended" Done
Link the first instance of "points" Done
There should be an apostrophe in "previous seasons", either "season's" or "seasons'" depending on whether you're describing one or all of them
Spell out and link first instance of CHL (not in Top Prospects Game, in "amongst CHL players") Done

Washington Capitals

Comma after "the Hershey Bears" Done
"on an amateur try-out ~~and made his professional debut at~~ for the tail end" to reduce repetition with "He made his AHL debut" in the next sentence Done
"to participate in the Capitals' 2014 rookie camp" Done
"after registering one assist" in how many AHL games?
Comma after "In his first two games with the Capitals"
"Upon joining the Bears" → "Upon rejoining the Bears" Done
I think I was at the game that broke his drought...
- GhostRiver Good Luck Charm circa 2018? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Capitals' bottom-six forwards line I mean, technically those are two lines
an average of 87:20 on the penalty kill An average of 87 minutes per game?!
- GhostRiver, per the article: Stephenson logged 87:20 of shorthanded time on ice this season Was 3 on 3 OT introduced at this time? because it could also be that....it could also just be a typo ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
Comma after "in the conference finals" Done
Comma after "Humboldt, Saskatchewan" per MOS:GEOCOMMA Done
"in 64 games during the 2018–19 season." (Then delink in the next sentence) Done
"played alongside new teammates often" → "often played alongside new teammates" Done
"attributed his decline in production ~~due~~ to his mental health" Done
Possessive for "six of the Capitals' seven" Done

Golden Knights

This section should be titled Vegas Golden Knights to parallel Washington Capitals Done
Lowercase and link general manager Done
"15-5" → "15–5" Done
"linemates as they suffered from injuries" → "linemates, who had both been injured early in the season" (checked against source) Done

Awards and honours

Specify "Stanley Cup champion" Done

References

The following should be reclassified from "publisher" to "work":
- Star Phoenix (Saskatoon StarPhoenix) Done
- Regina Leader-Post Done
- The Patriot-News Done
- Las Vegas Review-Journal Done

General comments

Pictures look good
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site

FINALLY putting this one on hold. As always, ping me if you have any questions, and let me know when you're finished. Thank you for your patience. — Ghost River 15:58, 28 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GhostRiver, done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:12, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- All looks good now, happy to pass! — Ghost River 19:23, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]