Talk:Chamuel (wrestler)

Chamuel (wrestler) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
August 19, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed
October 9, 2020	Good topic candidate	Promoted
February 15, 2024	Good topic removal candidate	Demoted

Current status: Good article

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"and occasional tag team partner Henry" - and with occassional
"in the vein" - style

Professional wrestling career

"Chamuel made his professional wrestling début in 2010, as the tag team partner of regular-sized wrestler Henry. The two portrayed a masked, monster/doll duo with Chamuel initially wearing a mask that resembled a ventriloquist's dummy but would later change to an evil clown mask." - these two sentences need to be verified by a reliable source(s) since CageMatch does not mention any of this
"initially wearing a mask that resembled a" - a mask resembling a
"On February 21 he defeats" - beat
"Chamuel capped off 2012" - more formal; ended

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)

"in an attempt to fool the referee" - deceive
"The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two" - repetition of the same phrase in the same sentence
"The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two as part of the CMLL 86th Anniversary Show." - This sentence is duplicated and only one should exist

Independent circuit (2017–present)

"While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - excess repetition of CMLL in the same sentence
"While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers," - repetition of working/workers
"Microman's independent circuit appearances usually see him team with and face off against other CMLL Micro-Estrellas." - think you mean Chamuel's?

Reception

"and a Cage Side Seats review named the match the "match of the night"" - repetition of the word "match"

References

Wikilink Agence France-Presse
The Author of Ref 21 should be formatted as |last= Has Pizzazz |first=Manolo

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 I have addressed all comments except the source mentioned, I will search for one and get it added ASAP. MPJ-DK (talk) 10:34, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Sourced, 100% done I believe MPJ-DK (talk) 17:25, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]