Talk:Champagne Problems (album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:55, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Here comes a review for you in the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 10:55, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Under the released and length parameters, shouldn't Champagne Problems not be before each part since we already know what these are?

•  Done

• Why is dance-pop not listed as the genre in the infobox?

•  Done

• The creation sentence should be the third of the first para instead, as this info should be before the final product's music

• I wasn't sure what you were asking here so I did some c/e hoping that helps resolve this issue.

• "Champagne Problems was created over" → "The album was created over" and shouldn't you mention this was during late 2021?

•  Done

• Remove the part about Heartbreaker having used the same format previously because this is the lead, not background

•  Done

• "from Champagne Problems #DQH1 and Champagne Problems #DQH2" → "from both #DQH1 and #DQH2" since you already wrote Champagne Problems #DQH1 earlier in this para

•  Done

• Remove wikilink on YouTube

•  Done

Background and creation

• Remove the comma before Heartbreaker

•  Done

• "on which it was issued for" → "which was released as planned for"

• I did some c/e.

Composition and reception

• "of 24UR, and is entirely performed in English unlike her" → "of 24UR and is entirely performed in English, unlike Inna's"

•  Done

• Wikilink refrain

•  Done

• "Musially, "Champagne Problems" is" → "Musically, "Champagne Problems" is"

•  Done

• Specify which series of Dance Queen's House the challenge was presented during

•  Done

• Are you sure the second OCC source can be used to verify it as her first entry since Hot because the history does not include download charts?

• I am not sure, but according to Inna discography, it looks like Hot was the first and last entry in a UK album music chart before this recording. This fact would be something Billboard would indicate, but I know that overseas music charts do not go in-depth or provide analysis for feats such as this one. Let me know what you would like me to do about this.

• Pipe GfK Entertainment to GfK Entertainment charts

•  Done

• The source does not call the album the singer's first charting record in Germany

•  Done

Track listing

• You should add the respective sources to these parts to verify the track listings

•  Done

Charts

• Pipe Official German Charts to GfK Entertainment Charts

•  Done

Release history

• Format → Format(s)

•  Done

References

• Copyvio score looks incredible at 1.0%!!!!
• Why does ref 2 cite Apple Music while refs 12, 13 and 14 cite iTunes Store?

•  Done

• YouTube should be cited in the via parameter and cite the uploader as publisher instead on refs 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 and 11

•  Done

• Pipe Official German Charts to GfK Entertainment Charts on ref 20

•  Done

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is a well-written article for sure however! --K. Peake 11:30, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

• @Kyle Peake: I wouldn't mind jumping in to help address these issues. Not sure if Darius is dealing with RL issues, but if it's ok with the reviewer, I'll see what I can do. Best – jona ✉ 13:25, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

• AJona1992 I am more than happy with that, being that not only has it been more than two weeks but there is not too many issues anyway. --K. Peake 16:29, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

• I have addressed the issues as well as did some c/e throughout the article. Best – jona ✉ 14:02, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• AJona1992 Thanks a lot for jumping in, but I would say the genres sentence about the first release should be the last of the first para instead and just remove the first release to chart part altogether, really. --K. Peake 11:25, 3 July 2022 (UTC)

• I have addressed the issues. Best – jona ✉ 13:27, 3 July 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, nice job as a replacement editor! --K. Peake 09:00, 4 July 2022 (UTC)