Talk:Chamber pop/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 22:55, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

(or ork-pop) → (also referred to as ork-pop)
but without irony or kitsch → without containing irony or kitsch

Definition and roots

1966 album → 1966 studio album
summarizes: "think → summarizes; "think
(no relation) → this is overfluous and can be thus be removed

He may be confused with Carl Wilson, who is Brian's brother and Beach Boy bandmate.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 09:37, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

that was labelled chamber pop → that approached chamber pop

I think this would be distorting the source, which is talking about the term "chamber pop", not the style.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 09:37, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

explained: "When → explained; "When
mystery ... → mystery [...]
"ork-pop" (says Chris Holmes of the band Yum-Yum) → "ork-pop", according to Chris Holmes of band Yum-Yum (unlink redlink)

I believe an article could be made about the group (WP:REDYES).--Ilovetopaint (talk) 09:37, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

music file > lead vocal → lead vocals

Emergence and popularity

O'Hagan commented: → O'Hagan commented;
there. ... → there. [...]
in their arrangements → who is 'they'?
wrote: "Bored → wrote; "Bored
popsmiths ... [are on] → popsmiths [...] [are on]
pop masterpiece. ... → pop masterpiece. [...]
these acts ... → these acts [...]
Most ork-pop musicians → The majority of the ork-pop musicians
of the music retailer → "the" is overfluous
Witch Hazel → redlink; fix

As above.--Ilovetopaint (talk) 09:37, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

as the duo → for duo
debut album: "in → debut album; "in
answered: "I → answered; "I
change. ... I → change. [...] I

References

No dead links. Good job!

Outcome

I've put this On hold for 7 days in order to allow edits on this article. Good job! Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 23:24, 1 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Done!--Ilovetopaint (talk) 09:37, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Ilovetopaint: Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:07, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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