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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 04:52, 29 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Taking, will do the full review soon. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 04:52, 29 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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  • "debut in the" → "debut at the"
  • The "In 1980, Chad joined with the United States led boycott over the 1979 invasion of Afghanistan during the Soviet–Afghan War." sentence should be moved into the paragraph above it as that one is more related to the boycotts
  • "athletics - Bachir" - the dash should be a —
  • "Ali Taher, in the" → "Ali Taher who competed in the"
  • "August on the second heat" → "August in the second heat"
  • You mention "Grasso, Mallon & Heijmans 2015, p. lxxv." in the refs but don't five the full details of the source
  • Link the work in ref 4 to International Association of Athletics Federations

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Nice article, putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 03:27, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Yellow Dingo: Thanks for reviewing, I've made those changes. Miyagawa (talk) 10:52, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, promoting. Well done! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 04:57, 31 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]