Talk:Centre Democrats (Netherlands)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 14:31, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Should it need a copyedit as the first review noted, I'll have this sent to GOCE, but we'll find out once the review is done. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 14:31, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

~~"it has been written that the Centre Democrats became almost a family affair." I'd take out the 'it has been written' part; doesn't sound encyclopedic.~~
~~"It did not however exclude people based on ethnicity" commas between however needed~~
~~"The Centrumtaal and the Middenkoers, were" remove comma~~

Just a few things to fix. I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:35, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have now resolved the issues you pointed out. – Bellatores (t.) 17:45, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Now that the issues are fixed, it passes as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:59, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]