Talk:Central Park Tower/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Add alt text to every image being used.
• Remove the comma after "900 residential units".
• Add a hyphen between "one third".
• Add an "a" before "single window".
• Remove the comma after "on the third floor".
• "A reinforced concrete" - is the "a" necessary?
• "superstructure is used" → "superstructure ars used"
• "rise the height" - typo for "raise"?
• "Extell announced it were" → "Extell announced it was"
• "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
• "which would" → "that would"
• Wikilink Michael Kimmelman, Robin Pogrebin, and Azi Paybarah.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have done all of these now. Regarding rise - I meant that the stairs extend the tower's full height, so I reworded it. Epicgenius (talk) 05:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)