Talk:Celestiial
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Broken link
[edit]Broken link - http://celestiial.xathagorra.com/
- I have removed it, thanks for the input. J Milburn 22:01, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
Why I just reverted North Canoe's edits
[edit]The edits took out information that was sourced, and added new information that was unsourced. The band does use keyboards, harps and piano- please see the cited source. Also, I searched for the keywords Celestiial "Waldländer im Herbst" "Abrons Art Center" "My Dying Bride" Opeth "Swallow the Sun" and got absolutely no results, so I can't see it being a particuarly notable/real event. I couldn't make sense of the changes to the bands that Anderson has been a member of, AND it removed further sourced information. Also, removing the sourced link to black metal, and the sourced fact that there were negative reviews, seemed to be uneeded. If you are going to add new information, please source it. If you are going to remove old information, please bring it up here, or at least talk about it in the edit summary. Thankyou. J Milburn 16:30, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
I am Tanner Anderson. My email is KVELDSETE@aol.com and you can confirm this by contacting Marty Rytkonen/Bindrune Recordings www.crionicmind.org/bindrune (Celestiial's label). Someone put inaccurate information on this page (i.e. I was never a member of Shroud of Despondency or "Despondancy" as it is incorrectly spelled on your page, I've never used "piano/keyboards", the double "ii" has nothing to do with "black metal" or "Mutiilation", www.balletdeviare.org does exist and Celestiial was featured - go to the website, click on events, specifically the event called "Forged"...). This seems to be more trouble than its worth. Contact me if you need to. The citation for Azrael you are looking for can be found here: www.moribundcult.com . I don't have a webpage for Celestiial and that isn't expected to change so I understand "official" information might be difficult to obtain. Regardless, I don't think incorrect information needs to be showcased on this site. Please don't take any of this as ego-driven. I'd just like to clarify the points that I think should be obvious at this point.
- I apologise if I seem to have been short with you. I have just e-mailed, I guessed that you wouldn't be coming back here. In any case, I will deal with the information now, and please feel free to bring up any more issues you may have on this talk page, or on my user talk page, or, if you would prefer, you can e-mail me. I will clarify that you are Tanner through an e-mail to Bindrune, but then I must ask you not to edit this article, due to Wikipedia's WP:AUTO guideline. However, if there is anything else you would like in the article, please feel free to bring it up at one of those places, but also please provide a source for it. Thanks! J Milburn 22:27, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
J, thank you. I got your email and replied.
North Canoe is Tanner Anderson
[edit]After correspondance with North Canoe, and Marty from Bindrune, I can confirm that Tanner Anderson was editing as North Canoe, but is happy to edit 'through' me, as it were, meaning he does not violate WP:BIO. I have made some changes based on his reccomendations, and he has agreed to keep me updated. J Milburn 09:07, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
GA Pass
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
- It is stable.
- It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
- a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- a Pass/Fail:
I'd like to see the infobox shrunk, if possible (it's a bit wide at the moment). Also, as noted in the review, a bit more mention of crtique etc. would be good. I'm sure that, with such a genre, there would have been a lot of critique and complaints (I don't mean that in a bad way!) Otherwise, this is a very good article. If a few more sources could be found, I don't see why it couldn't be taken to FAC. G1ggy Talk/Contribs 06:58, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
Image
[edit]What is this image's URL? Is there a bigger one? Alejandro Alatorre Vargaslugo (talk) 15:09, 30 March 2008 (UTC) (talk) 15:07, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
- This one? As far as I am aware, there is no bigger one. It was sent to me by Tanner Anderson by email. J Milburn (talk) 17:13, 30 March 2008 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
[edit]I performed a GA Reassessment of this article as part of the GA Sweeps project. My review is here. My primary concern is the prose, but overall I felt that article still held to the WP:GA Criteria|GA Criteria]], so I kept it at GA. If someone would be willing to do a thorough copy edit to improve the prose that would greatly help the article. H1nkles (talk) 16:01, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
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