Talk:Cedric Wright/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: BrandonWu (talk · contribs) 13:37, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Hello! I'm BrandonWu and I will review this fantastic article. I will try to work with this article during a 7 day time frame! Cheers!

Review

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   See below for a prose review!

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   Great lead, layout, etc. Lead could be a bit longer though.

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   See below for a source review as well!

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   Major aspects covered!

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   Pictures are good, when the future FAN occurs, you should add more images, but for GA the images are good.

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

#:Pass or Fail:

1. Pass Great job on this article! Hope to see at FAN soon! WooHoo! • Talk to BrandonWu! 12:07, 11 June 2014 (UTC)

See below for the prose and source review! WooHoo! • Talk to BrandonWu! 13:41, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Prose Review

Lead

• "He was a long -time participants in the annual wilderness High Trips sponsored by the Sierra Club."

Shouldn't it be ".....a long-time participant....?

I corrected that typographical error.Cullen³²⁸ Let's discuss it 03:46, 11 June 2014 (UTC)

• Family and Violinist Sections

No errors.

Friendship and collaboration with Ansel Adams

No errors!

Home

No errors...:P

All other sections

Fantastic job on prose! No errors!

You did a great job on the prose. Usually, I find over 10-20 spelling/grammar mistakes. Great job Cullen! Source review will be done shortly. WooHoo! • Talk to BrandonWu! 13:48, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Source Review

After spotchecking refs 1,3,5,7,etc., I've concluded that refs are perfect! All refs are reliable and they cover all the information that you cited. WooHoo! • Talk to BrandonWu! 13:49, 9 June 2014 (UTC)