Talk:Catherine O'Neill, Countess of Tyrone/GA1
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Nominator: SkywalkerEccleston (talk · contribs) 09:38, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 09:07, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one, expect initial comments initial comments in 24-48 hours. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 09:07, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Going section by section.
Lead
[edit]- There shouldn't be citations in the Lead
- Last sentence- paraphrase in wiki-voice
Early life
[edit]- I think the "ergo she was born ..." should be in quotes, as it seems quoted?
- Lead says her family was powerful, no refs or prose here that suggests that?
- Is that all about her, or can it be expanded?
Death and legacy
[edit]- Can this be expanded?
Issue
[edit]- Include as prose in the article, does not need a section
References
[edit]Good, all reliable
Overall
[edit]Will review the rest later, SkywalkerEccelston. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:55, 18 October 2024 (UTC)