Talk:Catch a Fire/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 00:16, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects):
b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox

In the "Recorded" section, put the date it was recorded first, and then follow it with the studios it was recorded at (Ex: May-October 1972; Dynamic Sound Studios)

Done--GoP _T ^C _N 09:42, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Length of album does not need to be cited

Done--GoP _T ^C _N 09:42, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The "label" and "producer" sections should have commas between the items

Done--GoP _T ^C _N 09:42, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Topic sentence should include what album was released (debut, second, etc.) and who it was by per WP:BEGINNING

It mentions the number and the band.--GoP _T ^C _N 09:44, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

...They approached producer Chris Blackwell... → "They" should not be capitalized

Done--GoP _T ^C _N 09:44, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

...the producer reworked the tracks with contributions... → Use the name of producer if possible

That would be repetition as he is mentioned in the sentence--GoP _T ^C _N 09:44, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background

No issues

Recording

No issues

Cover art

No issues

Release

Catch a Fire has been re-released under different recording labels with different track lengths. In 2001, a special collection edition was released containing unreleased, non-overdubbed ("Jamaican") songs on the first side and the original, overdubbed album on the second side. → Verifiable?

Added ref.--GoP _T ^C _N 09:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A documentary about the album, directed by Jeremy Marre, was released in 2000.[19] → Try to expand this information

Tour

No issues

Reception

No issues

Track listing

Make sure all listings have sources to verify the information

Personnel

Add one reference that supports all the information in this section

References

Reference 2 → "Temple University Press" needs to be wiki-linked
Reference 10 → "Allmusic" should not be italicized; "Allmusic" and "Rovi Corporation" need to be wiki-linked
Reference 18 → "Allmusic" should not be italicized
Reference 23 → Wiki-link "Rolling Stone"; Add publisher
Reference 24 → Add publisher
References 26 & 27 → Add full information for these references

All done--GoP _T ^C _N 09:59, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are minor prose issues and reference formatting issues that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 01:06, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review.--GoP _T ^C _N 09:59, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 17:33, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]