Talk:Cataldo Amodei/GA1

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Reviewer: Wretchskull (talk · contribs) 22:20, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Listening to his Gia col manto dell'ombre as I am reviewing this!

How lovely! I wanted to add some sheet music to the article, but have been unable to find anything online Aza24 (talk) 06:31, 6 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"However, records indicate that Amodei was still in Sciacca at this time" - "at this time" is redundant because "however" is an adverb that addresses his the aforementioned residence during that period.
"he is first recorded in Naples in 1679, though he may have arrived there at any point between 1670 and 1679" - "at any point" is redundant because that is already implied by "between 1670 and 1679."
Done

"He presumably assisted with the music" - "the music"? Any specification? If there isn't any mentioned in sources, ignore this.
I don't believe the musical genres themselves are known, just some of the occasions

"attempting to use a three-systems layout to fit more music on each page" - Perhaps better would be "to fit more musical notations".
Done, though a bit differently

The article is neutral, broad, well summarized, and free of edit wars and discussions.
The image of the sacristy is properly licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0.

I'm very sorry for the delay! I completely forgot about this review!

No copyvio detected
The Veneziano et al. and Robinson et al. refs don't have links with subscription required parameters like the Bossa ref.
- Done
Collisani ref needs a page range.
- The source doesn't have page numbers, I don't think
Spotchecks:

Bossa ref supports all cited text except 1. g and 1. j. "Amodei's compositions are religious in function" source? Also, note 9 shows that four librettos survive, which seems to line up with the source. However, locations aren't mentioned.

I think that was the one line I didn't write haha—I rephrased. The locations are based on the abbreviations in the comp list (I-MOe, Nc etc.); you can click on them individually to see the full name

D'Alessandro 2003 ref: I'm struggling to find "Cathaldus Vitus" on page XLV. Also, where does it say that he was the last of six children? I didn't spot any issues with the other pages.

The Cathaldus Vitus is in note 1, is that perhaps worth adding to the citation? The six children thing is in second half of the source's first sentence: "the penultimate of Gaspare and Antonia's six children". Incidentally, when I was looking for it right now it took me a good 5 minutes for some reason, so no worries on missing it! Aza24 (talk) 02:40, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AGF on Collisani ref: The text is in Italian but it's very easy to tell that it supports the text.
AGF on inaccessible sources.

@Aza24: Couldn't find any other issues. Ping me when you're done. Wretchskull (talk) 15:21, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Wretchskull: thanks for the thorough source review. I believe everything is responded to. Aza24 (talk) 02:41, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It's my pleasure! The article has been promoted. Wretchskull (talk) 10:54, 11 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]