Talk:Carrauntoohil/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:19, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I think you mean Arête rather than Arete. Done
" larger mountain walking routes" by larger do you really mean longer? Done
" as Old Red Sandstone" there appears no reason for this to be italicised. Done
"The three levels of " why is three levels in italics? Done
Indeed, a lot of the landforms noted are in italics, I don't think there's a good reason for that. – Being Ireland's largest mountain, I believe that some of these terms are reasonably widely known (especially amongst climbers), and thus have put into italics?
Devonian is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else. Done updated Geology section
"3,000-foot (910 m) in " this shouldn't be adj=on! Done
"steel cross. In 2014, this steel cross" repetitive. Done
" (Ballinskelligs Sandstone Formation)" is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else. Done updated Geology section
"Climber and author Jim Ryan" avoid false titles, so "The climber and author.." Done
"eleven shillings and two cents " not pence? Strange... Done - this must be pence
"70 cents " if this is Euro cents, link it. Done
"A State-sponsored " why capital S? Done
"the IT still " no clue about this abbreviation. Done Irish Times
"park?".[30]" remove the full stop. Done
"n 2018; the" a comma rather than a semi-colon here. Done
"attended over 40 fatalities" more than. Done
" noting that "many in the" grammar doesn't work for me here. many were? or start the quote later, i.e. noting that many were..." Done, started quote later.
" the col between" col is overlinked. Done
" above the col of the" here too. Done
Two single-sentence paras there, could they be merged into other appropriate paras? Done
Check completeness of refs, i.e ref 33 has no accessdate. Done
Make sure date formats are consistent, e.g. ref 21 uses ISO while others use DMY. Done
DoBIH is overlinked. Done
Iveragh Peninsula is mentioned as a category but nowhere else in the article. Done very good spot!

That's it for the first pass, so on hold. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:42, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Response

Thank you for that The Rambling Man, much appreciated. Have made all the above changes except for the use of italics for features - being Ireland's highest mountain, I think that these terms are more widely known, and thus wanted to highlight? Looking forward to your comments. Britishfinance (talk) 11:47, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. Re: italics, I haven't seen anything in MOS either prohibiting or encouraging the use of italics in these circumstances (unless I'm mistaken of course) so I think as long as you apply a consistent approach i.e. italics for every single instance, then I probably can't quibble in this GA review. Let me know your thoughts, and I'll do a final review later. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:03, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great The Rambling Man. I have fixed it that where italics are used, it is consistent throughout. Hopefully, that works. Thanks again. Britishfinance (talk) 12:34, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome, this is good to go, so promoting. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 07:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent, thank you for that :) Britishfinance (talk) 10:11, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]