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April 10, 2010Good article nomineeListed

Unclear statement

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The line "The song "Wizard of the Hood" was taken from the tape Intelligence and Violence, originally titled "Wizard of Delray", which is the first known recording of the song." is a bit unclear -- was the song or the tape originally titled "Wizard of Delray"? It might be better worded "The first know recording of the song "Wizard of the Hood" was under its original title "Wizard of Delray", on the tape Intelligence and Violence." or "The first know recording of the song "Wizard of the Hood" was on the tape originally titled Wizard of Delray but later changed to Intelligence and Violence.

Dadadaddyo (talk) 12:28, 28 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fox News interview

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"We represent people that were born without the silver spoon in their mouth but instead with a rusty fork...all these people, they view the underclass, they view the poor people as like carnival freaks, you know what I mean? And that's why we wear the clown make-up, we're representing them, we're representing the people that people would shove their kids away from and people would turn away, not look at—that's who we are."

Joseph Bruce, during a 1995 Fox News interview.[citation needed]

Is there a legal archive hosting this website - like the website of the local Fox affiliate? I know there's YouTube, but we can't use that here (it's OK on Hatchetpedia, though). (Sugar Bear (talk) 01:11, 19 February 2010 (UTC))[reply]

Comments

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Hi, I reviewed the article and there's some comments about:

  • On lead section
    • Music cover should have WP:ALT text.
    • "...with producer Mike E. Clark, who would work with the group throughout much of their career". -> This sounds strange (at least for me).
  • Music and lyrics
    • "poverish reality by gathering themselves in a forest called Picker Forest. Joe cites Picker Forest..." -> Picker Forest should be between quotation marks ("").
    • "on the Intelligence and Violence album". -> Intelligence and Violence is an EP.
  • Relase
    • "During a live performance of the song "The Juggla" in 1994, Bruce addressed the audience as Juggalos..." -> I don't know if this paragraph is in its correct section.

This are some things that were "strange" for me. Good luck with another reviews. TbhotchTalk 03:01, 12 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Ref #9 is a deadlink, and I couldn't find anything on web.archive.org about this link. –MuZemike 23:41, 28 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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