Talk:Carlos Menem/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:20, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:20, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

General

I think you should consistently refer to him as "Menem", except at the very beginning of the part of the article after the lead.

Early life and education

Say "Saúl", not "Saul"
He visited Buenos Aires with the team, and met the president Juan Perón and his wife Eva Perón You need to mention when this happened, and perhaps add "the then" before "president".
"Juan Perón" is linked twice in the section.

Governor of la Rioja

Sources for the section "2nd and 3rd terms"?
Justicialist Party (Partido Justicialista) (PJ) Mention all those names of the party only when you first mention the party. This link is, anyway, a duplicate.

Presidential elections

mistakes made by Menem and Alfonsín You have not yet introduced us to Alfonsín. Link his name only here, at first mention, and use his full name. Later on refer to him by his surname.

I will return to read the rest later. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:01, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done. I have preferred to introduce Alfonsín in "2nd and 3rd terms (1983–1989)", at the chronological point when he was elected president. Cambalachero (talk) 17:51, 13 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Busy in real life, I will finish the review in the next few days. Thanks for the changes. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:31, 16 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Presidency

privatize state enterprises - the first being telephones use a spaced endash
The first measure of the new economy minister, Érman González It may be helpful to add his tenure here. You may do the same for the fourth economy minister.
Cavallo began a second wave of privatizations When?
Domingo Cavallo was reassigned as minister of economy Just Cavallo will do
Duplinks: capital flight (Economic policy); Fernando de la Rua, Buenos Aires (Domestic policy); carapintadas (Armed forces and Terrorist attacks)
Is it Carapintadas or carapintadas?

Post presidency

First two paragraphs of "Corruption charges" appear unsourced
In June 2004 Menem announced that...locally led by Ángel Maza. source?
"Minister of Economy" should be wikilinked on first mention in the article. Stick to either "economy minister" or "Minister of Economy".
Duplinks: Justicialist party, Domingo Cavallo
and sentenced four and half years in prison sentenced "to"
Call Domingo Cavallo simply by his surname.
former justice minister — also received prison sentences of more than three years comma, not endash.

Rest looks good. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:45, 18 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cambalachero: Please respond. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 21 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm working on it. Cambalachero (talk) 16:59, 21 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done Cambalachero (talk) 18:43, 21 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, this can be promoted now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 01:58, 22 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]