Talk:Carl Gunnarsson/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- Link minor ice hockey.
Done - He probably had some stats worth mentioning from his junior hockey years. Maybe some awards? Done
- Add the Maple Leafs header? Done
- "Leafs best defenceman" Apostrophe. Done
- "teams final home game" Again. Done
- "Gunnarsson was traded to the St. Louis Blues (along with a fourth-round draft pick in the 2014 NHL Entry Draft)" Maybe "Gunnarsson and a fourth-round draft pick..."? Done
- "20 games for the Bues" Done
- "he was playing on a defensive pairing with Kevin Shattenkirk and helping the Blues maintain a 16-4-2 home record." Changing "helping" to past tense sounds better. Done
- "In the first year of his newest contract," Not the newest contract by the time we read the last paragraph of the section. Done
- "although" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
- AGF on offline sources.
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
- Nova Crystallis, I believe I have addressed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC)