Talk:Carel Victor Gerritsen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Can we link open government?

Linked.

• No link for "Neo-Malthusian League"?

There is no article so I have added a redlink.

• "in Amersfoort, the" link.

Done.

• "Dutch Reformed Church" link?

Done.

• Link Groningen.

Done.

• "Although Gerritsen probably never" Although he probably...

Done.

• "he was influenced by his ideas" -> "Gerritsen was influenced"

Done.

• "named De Dageraad, in 1882." sentence is unref.

Added.

• "Young Amsterdam" not notable enough for a link?

There is no article. Do you think I should add a redlink?

If you think it could host an article, then I have no problem at all with red links. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

• "Gerritsen's wife Aletta Jacobs ..." normally use upright on this kind of image.

Amended.

• Could link Legitimacy (family law).

Good idea. Wikilink added.

• Ref 15 should be pp.

Fixed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 5 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 07:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Red link issue aside, happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)