Talk:Canon de 130 mm Modèle 1924

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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-class status:
Referencing and citation: criterion not met Coverage and accuracy: criterion not met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion met Supporting materials: criterion not met

Associated task forces:
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	Military science, technology, and theory task force
	Weaponry task force
	European military history task force
	French military history task force
	World War II task force

Assessment

B1. It is suitably referenced, and all major points have appropriate inline citations. Fails, but just For it's length, it is appropriately sourced, however addition of more would help achieve other criteria
B2. It reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies. Fails If it says "used on a number of French destroyers", surely you can find more. Also, it's very short and some of the technical terms could be shortly explained to help readers.
B3. It has a defined structure, including a lead section and one or more sections of content. Passes
B4. It is free from major grammatical errors. Passes
B5. It contains appropriate supporting materials, such as an infobox, images, or diagrams. Fails. There's none - a picture of the gun (and possibly it's ammunition) would be a useful first step <br

So that's start class. 69.165.196.103 (talk) 16:30, 2 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]