Talk:Candy Shop (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 29 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

and Pharrell Williams while production → comma before "while"
carried out Madonna and Williams' production team → carried out by the singer and the latter's team
July 2007 but was quickly → comma before "but"
Link "pop" to pop music
and R&B and the instrumentation of → and R&B, with its instrumentation consisting of
Link "music critics" to music journalism
and catchiness but → comma before "but"
was certified platinum → was certified Platinum
top-twenty → top 20

Done

Infobox

flawless ;)

Background and composition

online but was quickly → comma before "but"
song Madonna and Pharrell Williams worked → no full names here
Williams recalled, "we → The latter recalled, "we
songs; "I love → songs, "I love
Link "pop" to pop music
lyrically the song uses → the song lyrically uses
Madonna sings "Come → comma after "sings"
The lines "My sugar → comma after "lines"

Done

Reception

Link "music critics" to music journalism
Allmusic → AllMusic
praised its catchiness; "set to a → ; to ,
Slant Magazine wrote: "Pharrell → : to ,
Talia Soghomolian, from musicOMH, was → no comma
review; "A couple → normal comma
Helen Brown, from The Daily Telegraph, compared → no comma
from Blender, called it a → no comma here
certified platinum → certified Platinum

Done

Live performances

were recorded and released in Madonna's → "in" to "on"
for party inspired → for party-inspired
in Golden Twenties inspired → in Golden Twenties-inspired
it on tour; "[her] obvious → ; to ,

Done

Credits and personnel

Unlink Madonna here

Done

Charts and certifications

flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

35.5% is acceptable!

Links

No problems here!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
2 dead links! Please fix!!

Outcome

On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:56, 30 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
- Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:39, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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