Talk:Camille Cosby/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 17:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

As a way to relieve the GAN backlog, I will be reviewing this article. Gerald WL 17:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

All references are reliable and there are no original research. Gerald WL 08:21, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great to hear! --Kbabej (talk) 20:49, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

There are various sentences that use multiple citations. My common take is that if one citation is enough to support a sentence or multiple sentences, just use one. If appropriate, mind relocating or removing redundants? Gerald WL 08:21, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. The redundant citations have been removed. --Kbabej (talk) 20:48, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Career

"In June 1987, Johnetta Cole of Howard University in Washington, D.C., presented Cosby with a Doctor of Humane Letters, an honorary doctoral degree." Should this be placed at the education section, since it's not really a career? Gerald WL 16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. That makes sense! The information has been moved to the education section. --Kbabej (talk) 19:43, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"In 2014, she wrote the foreword for The Man from Essence: Creating a Magazine for Black Women, a book by Edward Lewis of Essence." Since there is a statement before saying she wrote a foreword for another book, I suggest rewording this sentence to "In 2014, she wrote a foreword for another book, titled"-- blablabla you get it. Gerald WL 16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Yes, that was repetitive. It's been reworded. --Kbabej (talk) 19:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"The book was originally intended to be the subject of her thesis for her doctoral degree." ♩ Citation needed... na-na-na-na-na.... Gerald WL 16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. A source has been added. --Kbabej (talk) 20:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

- Same for "At the Black Reel Awards of 2000, Cosby was nominated for a Black Reel Award for Outstanding Television Movie or Limited Series for the film along with Jeffrey Grant." Gerald WL 16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. I actually cannot find one for the Black Reel Awards, so I removed the line. --Kbabej (talk) 20:54, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

Did a check, this seems to have Passed the GA criteria. Congrats! Gerald WL 05:04, 21 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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