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The lead section is evident, the overview is useful however should include a formatting that is similar to the most bibliographies which include a concise overview of the profession the individual, the date of birth and significance, the information provide doesn't give a date of birth of death(if necessary.
The key points/sub-points are some what unclear
The contribution need more information about her personal life howeever this is only a draft so its a respectable amount of information
The points that are presented in this text are well supported
Thesis and analytic focus
The focus of the topic is clear
The information seems appropriate to the case
Representativeness
The contribution could use more perspective on other scholars views on her and her work
The tone is appropriate however for the information given
Sourcing details
Claims aren't cited with references and doesn't really have many sources
Neutrality
The article has some non-neutral tones without supporting citations.
No, The article sometimes states opinions as facts
Yes
The Coverage is very balanced just could use more elements and content to the paper
Readability
A.
The paper is very well written
Sentences are carefully crafted to be grammatically correct
Yes
Yes
Yes
B.
Yes
Yes
Yes
C.
No
D.
No there should be pictures however \
Open Ended Questions
Question One
The topic its self seems interesting and she seems like an important scholar in academia
Question Two
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Pictures — Preceding unsigned comment added by 147.26.251.150 (talk) 00:36, 27 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]
