Talk:Camila Luna

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References for Latin Grammy Nominations

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Three referenced for the Camila_Luna#Awards_and_Recognitions section. This is a paid edit, I am employed by a related entity, see my talk page for disclosure. ESparky (talk) 06:47, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

For the 2015 claim.^[1] For the 2017 claim. ^[2]^[3]

References

^ Bisono, Juan Ant. (2015-11-03). "The Future Looks Bright for First-Time Latin Grammy Nominee Camila Luna". Miami New Times. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.
^ "18a Entrega Anual del Latin GRAMMY". Latin GRAMMYs (in Latin). Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.
^ Cobo, Leila (2017-09-26). "Latin Grammys 2017 Nominations: See the Full List". Billboard. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

Implemented Spintendo 16:23, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

External links in Biography section

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Thank you for the earlier edit. A few other issues I just noticed, might as well fix/improve while here.

--Again, Luna is not my artist, I stumbled upon this article, but I do work for a related entity.

In the Camila_Luna#Biography section.

1. Can we strike the external links?

~~Follow Camila Luna on www.instagram.com/camilalunamusic and www.facebook.com/camilalunamusic.~~

2. Perhaps adding a maintenance tag to the Biography section? To give her fans an indication to where the article is weak? There are additional Spanish language references out there -- Spanish is not my strong suit. (Section tags are way more useful than article tags IMHO.)

3. A reference for the last sentence in the lead section.

4. For the Camila_Luna#Discography section. AllMusic is missing the title, Flora y Fauna (2017), it can take months to get edits completed over there. They do have all the other titles.

<ref name="AllMusic">{{cite web | title=Camila Luna - Album Discography | website=AllMusic | url=https://www.allmusic.com/artist/camila-luna-mn0003494297/discography/all | access-date=2018-04-21}}</ref>

Flamboyán (2014) is an album and also a single. Since there is no prose, I guess just add <ref name="AllMusic"/> to each of the titles except Flora y Fauna (2017) for now. Can use <ref name="Cobo 2017"/> for that title.

Hopefully, somebody will come along and clean up the Biography prose. Thank you! ESparky (talk) 17:44, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reply

I've struck the text you asked for, and added the BLP sources maintenance template along with the BLP sources section and Subjective wording templates — which are all warranted. Spintendo 19:19, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Spintendo: If we implement the rest of the edit request (cite the claims), all of the other sections would be fine. The problematic portion (WP:PEACOCK you are referencing) seems limited to the biography section. If you will implement the referencing I asked for, I'll study her references and do a replacement paragraph for the background section and we'll have a decent/modest article. ESparky (talk) 19:51, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The references for the discography section were listed with the markup turned off on the main page, which is unusual to see there, and was thus treated in this instance by this reviewer as TLDR. For future reference, this step is unnecessary. WP:INTEGRITY allows for the references to be omitted there, as they inevitably arise in the Awards section just centimeters below the Discography section. Spintendo 23:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Spintendo: Should we do that last sentence in the lead just to finish? Prominent spot, I think the new rule is to include refs in the lead. Everything else looks good, Thanks ESparky (talk) 00:45, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

We shouldn't need to, all of the information in the lede is referenced in the main body of text. MOS:CITELEAD states:

The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus. Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none. The presence of citations in the introduction is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.

So in this instance it should be fine. What I did notice that is missing is Ms. Barbeito's DOB. Thanks Spintendo 01:09, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Spintendo: I read she was 22 in November 2015 (press time),[1] so {{Birth year and age|1993}}. I did not see a published date.ESparky (talk) 01:58, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll go ahead and post the year, per WP:DOB. Thanks Spintendo 04:34, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Replace Biography section with Background Section

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Let's get rid of the Biography section and do something like this as a section called Background. If I can also get the previous edit request referencing completed, I think we will have a modest trouble-free article. The fifth reference (below) is already in the article.

Disclosure: In the case that I draw a different editor, I work for a firm that has a relationship with the artist. ESparky (talk) 22:11, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Background

Camila Luna is a Puerto Rico born poet and has been living in Miami, Florida since the age of 3. She graduated from the University of Miami in 2015.^[1] She is currently (April 2018) working on a Master's degree,^[1] and is an MFA TA at the Miami College of Arts & Sciences.^[2]

Luna writes her music as poetry first, adding music later. Her first poem, "The Snowflake" was published when she was 5 years old and she credits her uncle for teaching her how to play the guitar at age 15.^[3] Her first two albums, Flamboyán (2014) and Flora y Fauna (2017) both earned nominations from the Latin Grammys.^[4] Without a budget, she filmed the music video for "Flamboyán" on her iPhone, in her grandmother's backyard, in Puerto Rico.^[5]^[6] The single, "“Siento”, from Flora y Fauna, had 3.2 million spins on Spotify as of October 4, 2017.^[4] — Preceding unsigned comment added by eSparky (talk • contribs)

References

^ ^a ^b "This Self-Taught Singer With A Latin GRAMMY Nod Is The Inspo Emerging Artists Need". VIX. 2017-11-15. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.
^ "MFA TAs". College of Arts and Sciences. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21. Camila Barbeito is an MFA student at the University of Miami. She is also a Latin Grammy nominated singer-songwriter of the Latin-alternative genre under the artistic name Camila Luna. She is a mixture of Puerto Rican, Venezuelan and Cuban descent and grew up in Miami. Camila is interested in family relationships, the Latin culture, musicality, and the juxtaposition between tenderness and subversive questioning.
^ "Camila Luna está nominada a su primer Latin Grammy por Flamboyán". People en Español (in Spanish). 2015-10-29. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.
^ ^a ^b "Camila Luna Celebrates Second Latin Grammy Nomination". CorrienteLatina. 2017-10-04. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21. This album came as a pleasant surprise for the Latin music industry. The first two singles received an incredible reaction from fans and music critics alike. "Siento" garnered 3.2 million plays on Spotify and "Despierto," the second single co-written by Simón Grossman, is getting close to half a million plays a couple of weeks after its release.
^ Cite error: The named reference Bisono 2015 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
^ Cantor-Navas, Judy (2015-11-12). "10 Latin Grammy Nominees to Know". Billboard. Retrieved 2018-04-21. Camila Luna, a 22-year-old recent University of Miami student, shot her first video on her iPhone while visiting her grandmother in Puerto Rico. Her first EP, the bouncy yet ethereal Regresa a Casa, was an independent effort, but it wasn't all an ingenue affair. It was produced by Jose Luis Pardo, who is DJ Afro of Los Amigos Invisibles, masters of the cool tropical sound.

Reply 21-APR-2018

Partially implemented The references provided for the Discography section in a previous post weren't read as being formatted correctly, so these could not be inserted (see my post in the previous section). Spintendo 00:15, 22 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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[Bisono_2015-1] Bisono, Juan Ant. (2015-11-03). "The Future Looks Bright for First-Time Latin Grammy Nominee Camila Luna". Miami New Times. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

[Latin_GRAMMYs-2] "18a Entrega Anual del Latin GRAMMY". Latin GRAMMYs (in Latin). Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

[Cobo_2017-3] Cobo, Leila (2017-09-26). "Latin Grammys 2017 Nominations: See the Full List". Billboard. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

[VIX_2017-4] "This Self-Taught Singer With A Latin GRAMMY Nod Is The Inspo Emerging Artists Need". VIX. 2017-11-15. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

[College_of_Arts_and_Sciences-5] "MFA TAs". College of Arts and Sciences. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21. Camila Barbeito is an MFA student at the University of Miami. She is also a Latin Grammy nominated singer-songwriter of the Latin-alternative genre under the artistic name Camila Luna. She is a mixture of Puerto Rican, Venezuelan and Cuban descent and grew up in Miami. Camila is interested in family relationships, the Latin culture, musicality, and the juxtaposition between tenderness and subversive questioning.

[People_en_Español_2015-6] "Camila Luna está nominada a su primer Latin Grammy por Flamboyán". People en Español (in Spanish). 2015-10-29. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21.

[CorrienteLatina_2017-7] "Camila Luna Celebrates Second Latin Grammy Nomination". CorrienteLatina. 2017-10-04. Archived from the original on 2018-04-21. Retrieved 2018-04-21. This album came as a pleasant surprise for the Latin music industry. The first two singles received an incredible reaction from fans and music critics alike. "Siento" garnered 3.2 million plays on Spotify and "Despierto," the second single co-written by Simón Grossman, is getting close to half a million plays a couple of weeks after its release.

[Bisono_2015-8] Cite error: The named reference Bisono 2015 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).

[Cantor-Navas_2015-9] Cantor-Navas, Judy (2015-11-12). "10 Latin Grammy Nominees to Know". Billboard. Retrieved 2018-04-21. Camila Luna, a 22-year-old recent University of Miami student, shot her first video on her iPhone while visiting her grandmother in Puerto Rico. Her first EP, the bouncy yet ethereal Regresa a Casa, was an independent effort, but it wasn't all an ingenue affair. It was produced by Jose Luis Pardo, who is DJ Afro of Los Amigos Invisibles, masters of the cool tropical sound.

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