Talk:Camara Phyllis Jones

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Conflict of interest

This MCQ page post clearly shows the conflict of interest of the main editor. ww2censor (talk) 23:37, 19 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have no conflict of interest with the subject and have revised the page to address issues belowSharkirk (talk) 21:44, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reads like a CV and lots of unsourced content

Given what's written in the article, Jones most likely meets WP:NACADEMIC; however, the article basically reads like an online CV which is not really the role of the article per WP:NOTCV. Some of the content should probably be rewritten as WP:PROSE and expanded upon a bit. Another problems is that pretty much everything outside of the WP:LEAD is not supported by any citations to reliable sources. This is a problem per WP:BLPSOURCES and the longer it's under addressed the greater the chance that content is going to start being removed. Not everything Jones ever did needs to be included in the article (even if supported by sources) per WP:NOTEVERYTHING so some of this content may needed to be trimmed regardless. -- Marchjuly (talk) 03:02, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I expanded on Jones' contributions and moved older biographical information to one section on education to avoid repetition. I added several citations. Additional citations are needed for education and awards.Sharkirk (talk) 21:44, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to propose an edit to the subject's personal information. Camara Jones was actually born on April 21 in San Francisco, California. She grew up in Detroit, Michigan where she went to Cass Technical High School.AaronShirley (talk) 01:07, 6 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Combined Sections

Hi, I changed the header of Education to "Early life and education" and combined the information about her residency training in this section. I added a couple of citations. Was unable to find a citation about her dissertation title but still searching for that. Beginner editor, happy to be here.Laurenledwards (talk) 16:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]