Talk:Caldecott MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

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• "the Thomson–East Coast line (TEL). " overlinked and you already abbreviated it so use that.. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:09, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• You abbreviate civil defence twice, but never use the abbreviation.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "TEL2" what's that?
  • Fixed. TEL Stage 2.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Bus, Taxi" Bus, taxi.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "surroundings are more" were.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "The station opened on 8 October 2011.[7][8][9][10]| four citations?
  • Fixed. Cut down on citations.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "on 29 August 2012.[11][12] On 15 August 2014" repetitive.
  • Fixed. Reword--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "proposed Thomson East-Coast line (TEL). The" en-dash.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "The station will be constructed as" tense?
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "consisting of 6 stations" six.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Caldecott TEL Station " station.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "to the COVID-19 pandemic has led to delays in " use the "in Singapore" covid article, and tense, i.e remove "has".
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "electronic rock blasting" what is that?
  • Not so sure. Some specific method for rock blasting--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "opening will be delayed" opening was delayed.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• General: is there a link for "interchange" or "interchange station"?
  • Fixed. Added in lead.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "extends to Gardens by the Bay.[29] Train" overlinked.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "range between" ranges.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Located underneath Toa Payoh Link,[31] the station is located" located... located... reptitive.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "Caldecott station CCL platform..." fragment, so no full stop.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• "These two ideas fused into" bit "brochure" speak, not encyclopedic in tone.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• Plenty of spaced hyphens in the ref titles.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
• And in Zhuang's title.
  • Fixed.--12:39, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:09, 27 September 2021 (UTC)