Talk:Caitlin Van Sickle/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:15, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:32, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Added a cat.
• "She played at the collegiate level for the North Carolina Tar Heels from 2009 to 2012" in lead, change to "She played field hockey at the collegiate level for the North Carolina Tar Heels from 2009 to 2012"
• "Caitlin Van Sickle during the 2019 FIH" Remove first name from caption.
• "Van Sickle made the varsity squad" link varsity
• "Van Sickle, a midfielder, recorded 10 goals" Is there a link for midfielder.
• "penalty corner inserter" I have no idea what that means, lol.
• "She has also served as a coach at" remove has
• Overall, this article reads well. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:32, 18 October 2024 (UTC)