Talk:Cafe Disco/GA1
GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- In the lead, you might want to remove "popular", per here. Do the same in the Reception section. Not a big deal, but maybe having "VP" ---> "Vice President", again not a big deal, just saying. In the Production section, "In the first 80-second clip, Kevin meets Lynne in the elevator, where he tells she smells like bacon", are you missing "her" between "tells" and "she"? In the Reception section, who's "Travis Fickett" and "Will Leitch"?
- Check.
- In the lead, you might want to remove "popular", per here. Do the same in the Reception section. Not a big deal, but maybe having "VP" ---> "Vice President", again not a big deal, just saying. In the Production section, "In the first 80-second clip, Kevin meets Lynne in the elevator, where he tells she smells like bacon", are you missing "her" between "tells" and "she"? In the Reception section, who's "Travis Fickett" and "Will Leitch"?
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- In the Reception, italicize "The A.V. Club".
- Check.
- In the Reception, italicize "The A.V. Club".
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- I believe File:The office cafe disco.jpg needs a lower resolution.
- Check.
- I believe File:The office cafe disco.jpg needs a lower resolution.
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Not much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
- Pass or Fail:
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 22:56, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
- I think I addressed everything. Thanks! — Hunter Kahn (c) 05:01, 6 July 2009 (UTC)
- You are welcome. Thank you to Hunter K. for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 14:47, 6 July 2009 (UTC)