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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:11, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will have a look. MWright96 (talk) 18:11, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • (Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL in Spanish) - rewrite as (Spanish: Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL)
  • Mexico City, Mexico should be simply Mexico City
  • "and the Panther" - Captalise the beginning of the word "the"
  • "The current champions are the team of Guerrero Maya Jr. and the Panther who won the championship on December 19, 2015 when they defeated La Comando Caribeño ("The Caribbean Commando"; Misterioso Jr. and Sagrado) to become the sixth championship team since Arena Coliseo championship was brought back in 2000." - since the Arena Coliseo championsip was revived in 2000

Background

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  • "The Championship was brought back in 2000," - The championship was revived in 2000
  • "(Sometimes billed as "Motorcross")" - Sometimes shouldn't be captialised
  • " La Comando Caribeño ("The Caribbean Commando"; Misterioso Jr. and Sagrado) became the fifth modern day Arena Coliseo Tag Team Championship on February 28, 2015." -Champions

Reigns

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  • "Win the victory" - With
  • "1,708 days although there were extended periods of time where the championship was not defended at all." - change to 1,708 days although there were extended periods of time where the championship went undefended

Rules

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  • "and has not allowed neither individual wrestlers to hold the championship by themselves nor teams of three to share the championship" - a period is need at the end of this sentence.
  • Tokyo, Japan should be shortened to just Tokyo

2000

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  • "CMLL Held a one-night," - Held shouldn't be captialised

2008

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  • "CMLL held a 16 team tournament in 2008, the top half of the bracket took place on June 15, the bottom half on June 19 and the finals took place on June 29, 2008." - 16-team is missing an hyphen and the comma after 2008 should be replaced by a colon

References

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Those are the issues I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 21:08, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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