Talk:Cómo Dueles en los Labios
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Cómo Dueles en los Labios has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 19, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Cómo Dueles en los Labios/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:56, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "being empty" not encyclopedic in tone.
- "as his companion" I don't follow this.
- "four music journalists although" i don't think basic English terms like this need linking.
- Silvio Rodríguez has a diacritic missing.
- I would expect to see the studio information in the article, not just in the infobox.
- "promotional tour of" no need to link.
- "feelings -- like spite -- are" should be single en-dashes, not double hyphens.
- The label is only mentioned in the infobox and not referenced.
- Ref 1 should be an en-dash, not a spaced hyphen.
- Ref 12, I think it'd be better to have Chicago Tribune in there rather than the web address.
- Fix the link to this article in the Maná navbox at the bottom of the article so it isn't redirected.
That's my lot for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:44, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: I believe I have addressed everything on the review. This article isn't one of my finest moments, but there was limited information that I could gather from sources. BTW, would you be interested in reviewing Vuelve (album) which is currently a FAC? Erick (talk) 14:18, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: No pressure, but how are both articles now? Erick (talk) 09:53, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
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