Talk:Butterfly (Mariah Carey album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:08, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Background
- Italicize What's On TV? and France Soir.
- Add 'a' before "media fodder"
- Hit Factory does not have to be between apostrophes.
- Writing and composition
- "Among ballads written by Carey and Afanasieff was "My All", one they wrote"- Change the last part for "written".
- The Beautiful Ones should be between apostrophes.
- "Carey's cover of Prince's classic,". Not subjective, change classic for song.
- Critical reception
Looks good.
- Chart performance
Looks good.
- Singles
- The quote of the Slant review looks kind of out of place. I suggest shortening it or removing it completely.
- Promotion
- All the television shows should be italicized (Rosie, SNL, Oprah, etc.)
- Italicize Around the World.
- Awards and accolades/Legacy
A few issues with this sections. First, I don't see how these sections couldn't be merged into one big legacy section. Second, I don't think the music videos are really notable on the legacy of the album, they should just follow each single on the singles section or be moved to the singles pages.
- Comment So regarding this, this is how its done on some GA, I copied the format from Legolas and his GA for True Blue (album) so it shouldn't be a problem.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 16:21, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- But the videos are a vital part of Madonna's career, speacially because all started during this era, Carey's videos are not memorable or ground breaking. This section could only apply to artist with videos that contributed significantly to the artist's image like Michael Jackson, Duran Duran or Madonna. 190.233.52.227 (talk) 17:58, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- It's ok, I just wanted to see something similar. Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:28, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Charts
Look good.
You've done a really good job with the article, I've actually learned a lot about Mariah reading it (I'm not really into 'divas' with big voices lol) and I might listen to some of her tracks now :). Good luck! Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:08, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Lol, thank you :) You also have done really well! Yeah, while this is one of her best albums, this by far is not her best-seller, thats Music Box--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 16:21, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- Congratulations! I'm passing this article. Xwomanizerx (talk) 18:28, 4 November 2010 (UTC)