Talk:Business routes of Interstate 75 in Michigan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 01:21, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   • "BL I-75 passes through residential areas and minor business area", seems to be an agreement issue here.
   • In the Saginaw section, you use "continued" in two consecutive sentences.
   • "Formerly a full business loop numbered Business Loop Interstate 75 (BL I-75), what is now BS I-75 followed what is now M-84 back to end at I-75/US 23 at exit 160 south of downtown", you use "what is now" twice in the same sentence. One of these should be reworded.
   • The sentence "M-93 was an only spur from downtown Grayling to the future Camp Grayling at this time" sounds awkward and needs to be reworded.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • You should mention how many lanes wide and what portions of the business routes are divided or not.
   • In the junction list for the Pontiac route, you clearly indicate the southern terminus of the Woodward Avenue Loop through a column span but do not for the northern terminus. You should either add one for the northern terminus of the loop or otherwise drop the column as it is really not necessary for a column span for the loop terminus.
   • "From that interchange, BL I-75 runs northward along Cooks Road in Horton and West Branch townships past the outlet mall", what is the name of the outlet mall? "the outlet mall" sounds vague. Either add the proper name or change to "an outlet mall" to better refer to it generically.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Pictures of the business loops would be nice to have. Also, It may help to have a map in the infobox showing where all the business routes of I-75 in Michigan are. However, the lack of neither will hold this article up.

7. Overall:

I will place the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough4872 01:52, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

@Dough4872: all are done except the lane counts, which are coming now slowly. Imzadi 1979 → 05:31, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

And those are now added. Imzadi 1979 → 05:41, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Dough4872 05:44, 9 June 2015 (UTC)