Talk:Burning Up (Madonna song)/GA1
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OK, I will begin now and likely make some straightforward copyediting changes as I go. Please feel free to revert any that inadvertently change the meaning. Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:35, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
Lucas also re-invented them thereby changing their structure from the original demo versions.- do you think the "reinvented" is important? Does it make for more impact than "Lucas radically changed their structure from the original demo versions."
- Changed to radically changed.
- PS:
Any further details on how the song was changed by Lucas, and then by Benitez would be great - i.e. describing how the original version sounded compared with what we heard on the radio.
- I tried finding for any further details, but only got that Jellybean included a guitar riff, that is already added.
Madonna was almost a professional by that time..- not sure what this is supposed to mean, she was about to or had already given up her day job?
- Added professional performer.
I remember the 12" being played a bit, yet is not really mentioned in the body of the text.
- Billboard did not have any information regarding the 12" bit, nor did any of the books.
- Finally, has the song been used in any other film or commercial etc. And has it been covered by anyone else?
- Covered during Madonna's induction to Rock and Roll, added in article. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
To sum up Nearly there - some minor fixes above and we're over the line Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:04, 24 July 2009 (UTC)