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  • name="CT-BK Broiler" Ryan, Nancy (15 October 1990). "Versatile Chicken Takes Turn On Grill". Chicago Tribune. Retrieved 19 November 2013.

GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 20:42, 26 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Seems fairly solid, and I'm almost done the two GANs I'm currently reviewing, so I'll take this as my next project. -- Zanimum (talk) 20:42, 26 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

TYVM, --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 01:18, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passing "Product description", "Advertising" (interesting how much info there is on the campaigns).

"Notes" is entirely about their trademarks, so why is it separate from "Trademarks"? -- Zanimum (talk) 02:45, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Notes section is for the citations for the trademark information. Instead of having half a dozen individual inline citations in the text for each nation's intellectual property authority, I chose to put one simple, small link in the text and put the citations in the notes section. It is an editing and aesthetics decision on my part and is based on the structure used in the Whopper article. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 18:54, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
That's fair, thanks! Passing "Trademarks" and "Notes". -- Zanimum (talk) 21:47, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I'm going to wait for you to finish looking over the article before working on the suggestions you make. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 08:41, 1 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I will finish this this week, I have a death in the family that requires my focus elsewhere for the next few days.--Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 08:59, 8 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Second round

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 Done--Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 20:18, 14 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Drat, I must have gremlins in my computer. I reviewed more of the article this morning, but can't find where I save it.

Passing "BK Broiler", "Chicken Whopper", "BK Baguette", "TenderGrill".

Competitive products

  •  Not done I don't think "By early-1991" needs a hyphen.
    I'm using the Chicago Manual of Style, which states that this type of format is hyphenated in noun and adjective forms (adjective-noun).
  •  Not done Not necessary, but you might consider a bit of sentence or two more on KFC, considering the reference in the BK Broiler section. Not necessary for a pass, but something to consider.
    That is an interesting idea, but the amount of research would be rather time consuming.

Images all pass.

Lead, infobox, references remain unreviewed. -- Zanimum (talk) 21:47, 27 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Third round

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 Done --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 20:18, 14 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox are passes, I'll just make sure there's nothing heinous in the references tonight. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:31, 30 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  •  Done The book excerpt on GMA's site: what does that have to do with Ad Age? They're mentioned once way down in the article.
    I have no idea what happened with that citation, it was all messed up.
  •  Done Burger King menu - Middle east --> Middle East.
    I fixed all instances so that they read Middle East.
  •  Not done Did any media outlet use the Center for Science in the Public Interest press release?
  • The Chicago Tribune did but there is no direct link. The site returns a 404 error. The other sites were not reliable.
  •  Not done There should probably be a [sic] in the "Franchisees on BK Kid's Club" title, as the apostrophe is unnecessary.
    That is the name of the article title, with the apostrophe.

Otherwise, the sources all seem to be quality.

I think that's it for the article. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:15, 2 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

So, how goes? -- Zanimum (talk) 18:34, 14 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I'm finished. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 05:33, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, was checking on the sic on the help desk, got a reply, but the last couple days have been an ice storm where I am. Passing. -- Zanimum (talk) 18:10, 23 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Zanimum (talk · contribs) 20:42, 26 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Move

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The full proper name should be used not the acronym which is not a COMMONNAME either. Ie- move to "Burger King..."(Lihaas (talk) 16:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)).[reply]

BK - Like the link? --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 06:16, 3 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move

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The result of the move request was: move to Burger King grilled chicken sandwiches. There is a clear consensus to retain the plural. Armbrust The Homunculus 15:00, 18 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

BK grilled chicken sandwiches → Burger King grilled chicken sandwich – I am recommending two changes to this article's title: 1) plural to singular and 2) abbreviation to full phrase. I recommend the singular form because of our naming conventions with respect to plurals, which state that "Wikipedia articles should have singular titles." I recommend switching "BK" to "Burger King" for several reasons. Firstly, it is more consistent with the title of the main article, Burger King. Secondly, this article's title is a common noun phrase, not a proper noun phrase like BK Chicken Fries, and therefore the existence of an official or marketing name does not apply here. Thirdly, our policy on article titles tells us to use commonly recognizable names, and spelling out "Burger King" makes the title more recognizable. Furthermore, a Google Books search reveals more hits for "Burger King grilled chicken sandwich" than for "BK grilled chicken sandwich". Neelix (talk) 04:29, 11 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Hatnote

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The hatnote linking to Burger King products and List of Burger King products should be removed from this article. Our guideline regarding hatnotes that link to articles that are related to the topic makes it clear that such links are an improper use of hatnotes. Neelix (talk) 17:58, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The section you link to is in regards to disambiguation hat notes (Disambiguation hatnotes are intended to link to separate topics that could be referred to by the same title). This links back to the two parent articles that are in summary style, as listed here. --Jeremy (blah blah • I did it!) 21:00, 15 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The guideline about the "main" link you mention is about putting links in subsections linking to subarticles, not as hatnotes at the top of articles linking to parent articles. Wikipedia:Hatnote is explicitly against placing these links at the top of articles. Neelix (talk) 16:56, 16 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Picture of Tendergrill is not reflective of current product

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I don't know the procedure and rules for getting a new photo in (I don't have a pic myself) but I just was at Burger King and the Tendergrill I got matches the picture on their website which shows a brioche style bun that doesn't at all resemble the one at the top of this article.

Link to BK product page Cransdell (talk) 16:36, 28 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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