Talk:Brumback's night monkey
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[edit]What do I need to do to fix this so that it has the correct style and form. I am sorry, as this is the first time I have tried to use Wikipedia and do anything to contribute to knowledge —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Aotusbrumbacki (talk • contribs).
- The article in of itself is in poor condition, which was why I placed the {{cleanup}} tag on it. At the moment it looks a bit essayish, which we try to avoid. You can check Wikipedia:Your first article here for some more information to get you started though. :) -WarthogDemon 03:59, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
- I have tried to make it bullet point and more succint. Is this better?--owl monkey guy 04:18, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
- Bulletpoints are horrible, as is signing your name on article. See WP:SIG WP:OWN and WP:MOS. Also, go look at a few similar articles, to get an idea of what you should be going --L-- 04:27, 6 August 2007 (UTC)