Talk:Brookville Tunnel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 12:23, 28 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

Remember to state the country; Virginia is not a place commonly known by people outside the US. (fixed)
Per MOS, don't comma a month–year combination, only date–month–year (fixed, good advice, beyond GA scope)
"During the American Civil War..." Years should be included to provide context. Don't simply presume the reader knows when the American Civil War was. (I doubt the average non-American would know this, and even many Americans can't keep track of it). (fixed)
I have used the syntax |disp=s in one {{convert}} template to avoid a double parenthesis. (fixed)
Please remember to use endashes for page ranges. (fixed)
I have fixed a number of significant digit errors in the convert templates. (fixed)
The article states "Today, Interstate 64 passes over the cut that replaced the Brookville Tunnel." I have checked the reference and I cannot understand how this claim is supported.

Done Sorry about that one, my mistake. The reference should have pointed to a Google Maps view of the cut and Interstate. I have both provided this and two text references. MountainRail (talk) 22:51, 28 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Refs 6 and 12 are identical and should be merged using the name syntax; the same goes for 1 adn 26; 7 and 9; 25, 32 and 48; 28 and 30; 16 and 20, and perhaps others I may have overlooked.

Thanks for the review Arsenikk! All the issues you have addressed should be fixed now. Thanks! MountainRail (talk) 22:51, 28 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]