Talk:Bromopentaamminecobalt(III) bromide
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[edit]Review #1 You are on a good start with a good basis, only the details need to be added in. Add more items to your chem box along with a picture, more CAS numbers, physical properties, and hazards as well as referencing each item. You should also consider adding in other names for Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide and inserting a ball and stick model of the chemical. Expand upon each section while adding in references and word links to other Wiki pages. Also put in a synthesis section if possible as the other two pages of this group have and insert mechanism diagrams as well. Add more detail in each section, particularly in the uses and hazard sections. Expand upon how Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide was found to be useful, how it is useful, who discovered the use, when the use was discovered, and the impact it had upon research and progression of that particular use. Explain or add word links to what the hazards are and what they can cause or lead up to. If there was ever a notable case in history in which someone was injured from Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide add that in there as well as possible effects of its hazardous properties. (Aradi7 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2012 (UTC))
Review #2 You have a good page so far. You have a lot of essential and basic information on your compound. My suggestion would be to just expand on what you already have. First, the chembox needs more information. Put in a picture of Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide and add more identifiers. More importantly, list more properties of Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide. Also, if you can, put in a ball and stick model of Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide to give the reader a better picture of what it looks like in 3D space. The sections you have so far are very good. I would recommend expanding the sections you already have and adding more sections. Try finding an article that explains how Bromopentaaminecobalt(III) bromide reduces the extent of viral infections in a more detailed fashion and if this has led to breakthroughs in treatment of viruses. Just continue looking for more information. You've done a great job so far and keep up the good work!
(Dgraber2 (talk) 20:02, 1 November 2012 (UTC))
Review #3 You have a good page, lots of information in the sections that you have. The problem is you are limited in your sections! Expand upon what you have and add more sections. Your chembox is relatively barren, it needs more information. You can also show the structure in three dimensions if you try to create a jmol of your molecule. Try to include a synthesis or a description of the synthesis of your molecule, assuming that it is present in one of the papers you have cited. Also, give a concrete example of your molecule helping out medically, perhaps an article that shows the molecules use. Other than those, you have done a lot with your page! Good Job!