Talk:Broadway Limited/GA1
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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 02:04, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
Review (after a month!)
[edit]@Mackensen: Apologies for the appallingly long wait; I'll have a review soon. 23W 23:26, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
[edit]- There's one {{citation needed}} tag in the Pennsylvania Railroad section.
... described by a PRR brochure as "cheerful, spacious...richly appointed for leisure with deep, soft carpets...latest periodicals are in the libraries.
: needs a closing quotation mark; the ellipses should either have spaces on both sides (if an omission) or a single space following the next word (if present in the citations) per MOS:ELLIPSIS.train #29
should be turned intotrain no. 29
per MOS:NUMBERSIGN.- Toolbox tools showed no bad signs, so I think we're okay.
Nicely written and decorated article. Not much needs to be done. Sorry for the abysmal wait; bit off more than I could chew. 23W 07:29, 21 January 2015 (UTC)
- Fixes made; no worries about the delay. Mackensen (talk) 12:14, 21 January 2015 (UTC)
- Looks good! I made the following copy edits (hopefully they're correct, otherwise please revert them). Passing. 23W 20:51, 21 January 2015 (UTC)